Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Oral Picture: Monkey Bar

Oral Picture : At the beach
Introduction Setting

This picture shows a scene at Yu Yang Primary School’s Fitness Corner. It might be after school time as there is not much students at the fitness corner. These students could be staying back to play.

Scenario 1 a) – Wrong and Consequence
a) Describe what I see in the picture

Two boys are playing soccer. Their expressions on their faces shows that they are having a great time exercising their legs.

b) Personal Response

I think that they should not play soccer in the fitness corner as there are many obstructions. If they accidentally kicked the soccer ball too hard and it is possible that it will hit someone and that person would get injured. I suggest them to go to an open field or a spacious area with no obstructions instead.

Scenario 1 b) – Cause and effect
a) Describe what I see in the picture (Cause)

A girl who has fallen from the monkey bars is wailing in pain. Her right elbow has a bruise and is bleeding profusely.

b) Describe what I see in the picture (Effect)

A boy is running towards her frantically. He is concern about her and is reaching his hands to help her up. I am sure he is going to report her to the teacher in the general office to inform her parents and bandage her wound.

Another boy hanging onto the monkey bar looks worried. He could be afraid of falling off onto the girl as the girl is just under him. He is trying his best to hang on. If I were him, I would do my best to hang on even if I cannot hold on to the monkey bar any longer. I will wait for the other boy to bring the girl away first.

Conclusion

The fitness corner is where students exercise. We should all be extra careful to avoid any mishaps or accidents. Safety comes first when playing.

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